Peeki
Artisan
Supreme Angel of Kitties
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Post by Peeki on Feb 23, 2006 9:13:41 GMT -5
Here's a poem I wrote... god knows when. ^^; I seek a path of truth and life, Will you show me or will you lie?
I want a place to hide my fear, To hide my past, to see what's clear.
My time is at an end, I will die, Painful death, silence while I lie.
Will you comfort me, With your warm words, With your presence?
Or will you flee, Making me suffer, With your absence?
Silence has consumed my soul, Left my path, and left my role.
Death awaits me, here's my toll, My dreams are over, I'm about to fall.
I open my eyes, I see no signs of strife, My life begins once again, the afterlife. Comments, suggestions, criticisms are appreciated. (God how I hate that word... criticisms... >_<)
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Post by The Trapdoor Lover on Feb 23, 2006 11:43:06 GMT -5
AH! Why do a suck at writting poems? I wanan wrte poems as awesome as this one.
4/5
Such a morbid poem.. : P
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Peeki
Artisan
Supreme Angel of Kitties
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Post by Peeki on Feb 26, 2006 10:40:36 GMT -5
Thank yous, thank yous. ^_^.
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Post by The Trapdoor Lover on Feb 26, 2006 21:14:04 GMT -5
Thou art welcometh. ^^
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Ashi
Wanderer
Evil with a sweet touch :)
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Post by Ashi on Mar 3, 2006 17:53:48 GMT -5
Nice poem Peeks! ^^ 'twas morbid and yet it had belief and hope in God at the same time.
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